Jasmine Hart

Brigid Siofra and Oisin spent most of the remainder of the night planning feeble strategies. I offered to take over watch for both of them in turn, just to split ...

Who Killed Lord Potemkin? Completed on Valentines Day, 2006 Scene I: The stage is dark and empty, except for a desk and chair DSR. One spotlight shines on the desk ...

When you find yourself counting the syllabyls in what either people around you, or characters on t.v are saying.

"The Wish List" by Eoin Colfer.People getting mixed up with the bodies of dogs on the way to hell? Eh, what? Don't know why I even finished this one.

Wow. I love your imagery.This just flows so beautifully, and it's so powerful. There are shivers starting at the base of my neck. I especially love the first image, and ...

I really liked this, and your imagery is amazing.The flow was very favourite parts were; like a mouse trap catching a rat instead. Lady luck is too much of a ...

I won't say this was nice, but I thought it was good. I'd change "runny" in the third line, as you've already used it and I don't think this is ...

I love how you get better and better with everything you write. It's amazing to watch. The first stanza is great, but I think I'd change the third line to: ...

Oh, but was this an exercise in cinquians, or an exercise in berries? Either way, I'd experiment with either cinquians, or berry-poetry, to see what happens.

It is nice. By saying "ripe feeling" do you mean that the berries feel physically ripe, or thay transmit a sense of "ripeness" along with the happiness which I think ...

I like the first one best :)

My initial reaction was like Fangala's. So also was my last impression. Your rhythm here is really great. As I was reading through it, I was like "Hey...this sounds like ...

I liked the style of this, and I loved the first line. Very Plath-esque! I'm not sure about the poppies glistening...I know you must mean the dew...but maybe refer to ...

Thanks for reading this.There is indeed! Care to take a guess? (I'll only tell if you guess correctly!)Heehee.